Gamoc
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Post by Gamoc on Sept 29, 2007 10:23:39 GMT -5
How did I do on this one?
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Post by racinfan88 on Sept 29, 2007 10:42:22 GMT -5
Very, very good. The colors and brushing blend together very well. Everything really fits well together. Just make the text a tad darker. 9/10
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Post by Gamoc on Sept 29, 2007 11:30:05 GMT -5
Awesome, thanx. I made a second copy, even though I like the first one better.
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Post by stonesoup on Sept 29, 2007 11:36:30 GMT -5
pretty nice could use a lightsource. but ya. good
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Gamoc
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Post by Gamoc on Sept 29, 2007 13:07:03 GMT -5
I have a light source behind the c4d.
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Post by RoGeR on Sept 29, 2007 18:33:25 GMT -5
Looks good Colors are good, render could use more blending, and text needs to be fixed ;D Anyways, you're doing really good Keep it up
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Gamoc
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Post by Gamoc on Sept 29, 2007 19:47:15 GMT -5
Well, I worked on both, stonesoups and RKO's suggestions. Thanx, here is the next result.
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~«Jesse»~
Just a mommy doing graphics.
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Post by ~«Jesse»~ on Sept 29, 2007 21:05:28 GMT -5
I like it.
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Gamoc
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Post by Gamoc on Sept 29, 2007 21:50:10 GMT -5
Thanx, I'm glad you do.
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Post by stonesoup on Oct 1, 2007 16:20:01 GMT -5
better. its kinda hard to do cuz the render was kind of shadowless and therefore the lightsorce was a little hard to depict for t he maker. overall pretty good
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Raelin
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Post by Raelin on Oct 2, 2007 15:21:20 GMT -5
I like the tone. Sepia can be disgusting, but you did it right.
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