Gamoc
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Post by Gamoc on Sept 30, 2007 11:57:14 GMT -5
How does this one look?
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Post by RoGeR on Sept 30, 2007 12:29:00 GMT -5
Looks nice mate Everything suits, render is well blended, effect/lighting is good. Ummm. however, work a lil on the right side, could use some touch Keep it up.
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Post by Gamoc on Sept 30, 2007 12:43:20 GMT -5
Yeah, I've been trying to think of something that I could do for it to not totally throw off the rest of the siggy. Thanks. I got a rate somewhere else that suggested some other things, does this look any better.
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Post by R Ø G U € » on Sept 30, 2007 16:07:12 GMT -5
Where's the focal point? It's voldemort, right? (I had to look to find him. lol) He's blended good, but at the same time a little too good, it took me literally like 3-5 seconds to find him, which isn't necessarily a good thing. Also, the sig looks a little flat IMO... Try using the blur tool to create a main focus point / add more depth. Your color choice for this tag is awesome, and the text placement is good, but as stated above the right side could use a few subtle touches. I would get rid of the second voldemort render... It's not necessary, and looks a little odd... Overall: 6.7/10 Keep at it,
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Post by Raelin on Sept 30, 2007 16:54:42 GMT -5
Thar be some secksy VOLDERMORT.
No problems. I like the well-blended render. 9/5.
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Post by Gamoc on Sept 30, 2007 17:23:47 GMT -5
Umm....okay Where's the focal point? It's voldemort, right? (I had to look to find him. lol) He's blended good, but at the same time a little too good, it took me literally like 3-5 seconds to find him, which isn't necessarily a good thing. Also, the sig looks a little flat IMO... Try using the blur tool to create a main focus point / add more depth. Your color choice for this tag is awesome, and the text placement is good, but as stated above the right side could use a few subtle touches. I would get rid of the second voldemort render... It's not necessary, and looks a little odd... Overall: 6.7/10 Keep at it, Thanks. I'll have to do that in a bit, a little busy right now, though. Thanks, though. EDIT: This is the best that I could get it (that is, until it looked out of blend)
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Post by De$ertW0lfo1 on Sept 30, 2007 20:07:51 GMT -5
Nice Job! your getting better
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Post by R Ø G U € » on Oct 1, 2007 20:23:54 GMT -5
Thanks. I'll have to do that in a bit, a little busy right now, though. Thanks, though. EDIT: This is the best that I could get it (that is, until it looked out of blend) Hmm... Looks better. But there are few things that could be modified. The C4D thing in the bottom right corner is under-scaled. It just ends at the top leaving a weird "end-line". Voldemort's new placement seems a little odd to me for some reason... I think it's because his head is off screen, and he's far to the left. Try moving him to the right a little bit and pulling him down so his head isn't off screen. The last things I have a problem with is the lighting, the depth / focus. The lighting. The light on the render is obviously coming from the right. Try to make all the light in the sig come from the right. The depth/focus. I can sum this up pretty quick. Turn towards the wall in your room that's furthest from you. Now hold your hand up, fingers spread, and focus on it. Whats the first thing you notice? When your vision is focused on your hand, ( which is the closest thing to your eyes ) everything behind it gets blurred, and almost seems a little farther away. Apply that same concept to your sig and you will have awesome focus and depth. To do this, you can use a blur filter with low settings on everything below voldemort, or you can use the blur tool and do it by hand. Using the blur tool would probably be a better choice... Anyways, when you use this technique, you force the viewer's eyes to the focal point first. Overall: 6.5/10 keep it up.
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Post by No, it's Cymbals. on Oct 7, 2007 9:46:45 GMT -5
Looks skewed. Render looks pasted on. More coloring. Minimal but existent flow. Build on that.
4/10
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