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¤Pablo¤
My mind runs laps with no end to the constant thoughts - Steven Pablo
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Post by ¤Pablo¤ on Oct 8, 2007 19:26:10 GMT -5
100/10
i think the only thing you need do learn now is animation ^_^
NICE JOB
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Gamoc
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Post by Gamoc on Oct 8, 2007 19:36:22 GMT -5
Thanks. I know animation, though. I just don't generally use it in siggys. I have fixed it up a little. Here's version 2.
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Post by R Ø G U € » on Oct 10, 2007 20:12:52 GMT -5
Turn up the opacity on [the left] maril, and remove the second maril render [on the right]. (If the first maril sticks out too much throw a gradient map on it.) I see shadows but no light. (unless that swirly thing is the light.) I think you should use some splatter brushes and some clipping masks on this one. Overall: 5.5/10 Lets see a V.3
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Post by De$ertW0lfo1 on Oct 13, 2007 8:40:13 GMT -5
Your just getting better and better! I like this one, Nice Job! 8.5/10
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Gamoc
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Post by Gamoc on Oct 14, 2007 20:58:32 GMT -5
Thanks, glad to see that I am getting better. Turn up the opacity on [the left] maril, and remove the second maril render [on the right]. (If the first maril sticks out too much throw a gradient map on it.) I see shadows but no light. (unless that swirly thing is the light.) I think you should use some splatter brushes and some clipping masks on this one. Overall: 5.5/10 Lets see a V.3 I tried, the effect went away with getting rid of the second sprite, when I just did an apply image, flipped it an opaqued it. The switle thing was supposed to be light, but I put light in to corner and made the swirly thing just and addition. I might try to add some more lighting tomorrow after school. I might do the splatter tomorrow. I'm pooped today. Thanks, I see how that could really improve it. Thanks for being such a hard judger.
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Post by R Ø G U € » on Oct 15, 2007 0:17:50 GMT -5
^ I'm just doing it to help you improve. If I only told you what you did right, you wouldn't know what did wrong or how to fix/ improve it.
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