Edwards
Aka: Brian Silver
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Post by Edwards on Dec 1, 2007 15:45:47 GMT -5
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No, it's Cymbals.
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You're not as clever as you think you are.
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Post by No, it's Cymbals. on Dec 1, 2007 19:45:32 GMT -5
Dont put stuff over your render. Also make the stuff coming from the ground so it looks natural. Add flow and work on your depth and compo as well. ANd also worko on the text
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Post by aoeclald on Dec 1, 2007 21:39:18 GMT -5
Erase parts of the area on the stock piece so that way it doesn't look like a nicely looking pile of brushing, but a few nice looking (and complementary) brush strokes. The text, in my opinion, looks fine. Get it closer to the focal, though, because the text takes away from where you want the person to be looking (Halo). Brian S. text is unnecessary. Good use of filters and adjustment layers. Good use of making it look old/dirty to meet the "War Zone" theme Overall, just work on cleaning up the focal. Great job
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