Raelin
Van Buren+Sax=Vanbursaxy
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Post by Raelin on Dec 21, 2007 18:31:02 GMT -5
The second one is mediocre. Harsh rates plz.
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Post by bfg15000 on Dec 21, 2007 19:20:31 GMT -5
The second one is better than the first.
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Raelin
Van Buren+Sax=Vanbursaxy
Posts: 38
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Post by Raelin on Dec 22, 2007 12:24:08 GMT -5
But the first one has depth!
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Edwards
Aka: Brian Silver
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Post by Edwards on Dec 22, 2007 14:16:03 GMT -5
The first that I noticed in both signatures was the text. Its way too big and really kills your signatures flow. That also brings me to my second point, I don't even see a focal point. Without a focal point the image is just chaotic, and also has no flow. In the second one your text is your biggest focal point, and you don't want text as a focal point. Also the border on the second one is way too big. I would try reading a basic tutorial so you can get a good defined focal point going, and picking up a few ideas and techniques
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