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Post by stardoge on Jan 30, 2008 18:12:26 GMT -5
Hey, Please C&C thanks
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Post by R Ø G U € » on Feb 3, 2008 22:22:21 GMT -5
Wow. That's pretty good. The BG is good, but I don't like that the render is "duplicated". It slightly gives the effect of her turning, but I think the tag might look better without the double. The outerglow on the render seems to work well with blending her in. Good thinking. The lighting and depth need work. The light should be coming from the upper-right of the render, and everything to the left of the render should be slightly darker. (Just horizontally flip the BG and that should do it. XD) The sig's depth, or rather the effects look flat-er because the focus. The BG needs to be SLIGHTLY blurred, (use the blur tool on low settings for that) that should put focus on the chick. Lastly, the border is too thick. I would reduce it by 2-3 pixels. Overall: 7/10 Refine your techniques a little more. Hope this helps.
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Post by iskatebaker on Feb 5, 2008 22:02:10 GMT -5
I'm liking this for the most part. The bg looks great, no complaints. The only thing I'm not really into is the text. You could have used a better font/size and the outer glow being the same color as the text doesn't help it out much. But yeah, I like it. Good work.
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